Allie DeGrazio 1/11/12
Boardroom Essay Pd. 4-5
Music Pens are the best pen around. There is no product like it! I’m sure people would enjoy my commercial very much. It might even double your views! Music pens come in seven different colors. It’s also 100% recycled. We even donate 3% of your purchase to breast cancer awareness. My commercial would be the best for after the three o’clock news.
As I said before Music Pens aren’t your average pen. They’re better! They play music while you write. You could even put headphones in it! Also, you can get music easily off of the computer. It doesn’t get much cooler than that! This pen has so many cool features!
Music Pens also come in seven different colors. Our colors are: red, green, blue, yellow, pink, orange and purple. Most companies don’t offer such a variety of colors. Just think, your pen could match your outfit! Music Pens are also great for drawing with.
Music pens are 100% recycled. They’re made of all natural products. Go green! You could enjoy writing and be saving the earth at the same time! Our commercial would get many views when people see that our pens are 100% recycled. Everyone likes to save the earth! Music pens are completely un-breakable. They will never break. Most pens break right away, but not ours!
I think my commercial would be the best for after the three o’clock news. I’m sure it’ll double; maybe even triple your views! Our pen is better than the gummy yummy pencil and the tootsie roll pen. They can get sticky and messy, and maybe even distracting. But music isn’t distracting! The gum and tootsie roll can also get stale. And anyway, who wants blue pee and constipation?! There are so many cool features on Music Pens. They come in many different colors. They’re great for drawing with. They’re un-breakable, and 100% recycled. It’ll be music to your ears…while you write!
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